I was pleased with how my attempts at continuing the fountain turned out.
Looking at it again, I realise that the fountain should actually hit the TOP of the text rather than the bottom. If it hits the TOP, then that guides the eye down the page much more smoothly.
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The second draft is very cool. Nice, neat and clean (apart from the humour of course).
Thanks, H.
I was pleased with how my attempts at continuing the fountain turned out.
Looking at it again, I realise that the fountain should actually hit the TOP of the text rather than the bottom. If it hits the TOP, then that guides the eye down the page much more smoothly.
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