10.40 am: This reading was great. Long stretches where the emotion’s sustained. And I can see ways to fix the slumps. [29/14]
11.12 am: I’m simplifying this re-write, focusing on character motivations. Like where it’s going. Wouldn’t it be cool it I could finish this today?
12.00 am: Readthrough felt pretty functional – but it’s getting the job done. Act One works! [29/21]
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