[The Limit] Fleshing out Act 1

All comments from my readers are now in. They all did a great job - and from the many issues they identified, it looks like my major focus will have to be on reworking Act 1. Characters seem to be reacting appropriately; it's just setting up their motivations that's the trick. Things to address include:

- expanding on the custody arrangements;
- developing the father-son relationship; and
- answering the question, "Who is Taine?"

Revealing character motivations is also an issue, but I'm not so worried abut that; there's plenty of space in the script to slip that in.