Yesterday was a write-off due to seeing the Phoenix Foundation, making some new friends and getting very drunk. Now it’s time to become obsessed by whether I’m getting the emotions of this pitch across.
Act 3 feels like it’s achieving this but the earlier stuff feels plain, descriptive. Insight: I have to figure out the emotion that I want each sequence to convey. Then, change the pitch’s language so it’s not so much about what’s happening but how I feel about what’s happening.