Saturday, January 15, 2005

[The Limit] Send Off

Sent the polish of The Limit off to AB today. I'm not fully happy that I've integrated Forster's new motivation into every one of his scenes but it seems more important to get this treatment read than to get it right.

Up next:

Based on SDM's feedback, I'll massively simplify my script-outline review. I was making specific comments on the movie but I need to focus on redrafting a short essay about my fundamental problem with the film. Good. This'll challenge the current structure, suggesting what it could be rather than than reviwing what it is.

Taking today off. Essay tomorrow, then The Farm review, then some actual play reports.

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